หลายๆคนคงมีความฝันอยากทำอะไรสักอย่างก่อนที่จะเรียนต่อ ไม่ว่าจะต่อปริญญาตรี หรือ ปริญญาโท บางคนฝันว่าอยากไปท่องเที่ยวหาประสบการณ์ใหม่ๆสัก 1 ปี บางคนก็อยากลองฝึกงานในด้านต่างๆเพื่อค้นหาความต้องการที่แท้จริงของตนเอง น้องๆล่ะคะมีความฝันอย่างไร? วันนี้เราลองมาเขียนบทความใน Writing IELTS Task 2 ถึงข้อดีและข้อเสียกันดีกว่าค่ะ
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In the modern world, there are some opinions of youngsters who would prefer working or travelling for a year before entering to undergraduate level in university, but most of them are willing to study first. This essay will examine benefits and drawbacks from this issue.
It is undeniable that many juveniles are too young for world exploration and responsibility for career. It can state that knowledge and experience are too early for young people to work in corporations. Dangers from journeys can happen to those who do not know situations and cultures in countries such as many thieves in Rome, looking for a chance of stealing. There is also a lack of taking care of parents for prosperous future, including a good nurture and experience from guardians. In many countries, there is a set of laws which legislate to protect juveniles from crimes. Moreover, by this age, those who would like to travel need much money to spend on which many youngsters cannot acquire. For example, Mr. Jade, one of my friends, found an unlucky situation during his trip in Laos. His wallet was stolen because the thief thought that he was young and easy to steal.
In the positive views, some encourage teenagers to use their life extremely such as hard work and travel because they will get many real experiences which can adapt to use in future. They can find different cultures, lifestyles from other societies and many citizens with various languages. This can develop them to open worldwide views in the world. Experiences from other societies and work place might help those better making a decision than stay with their parents. For instance, my niece who was seventeen years old had a secretary job in a small company. She learnt many skills such as planning and scheduling.
All in all, juveniles who do not decide to work or travel early can have many benefits from taking care of parents, laws and society in university. On the other hand, some adults believe that teenagers who are encouraged to explore worldwide can have a lot of experiences at younger age.
IELTS Institute Team
