สวัสดีค่ะ น้องๆทุกคน วันนี้พี่นำตัวอย่างงานเขียนบบรรยายกราฟ Bar Chart เกี่ยวกับการท่องเที่ยวของเพื่อนๆ มาฝากกันนะคะ ลองมาดูวิธีการ Implement กราฟจากเพื่อนของเรา แล้วคราวหน้าเราจะกลับมาเฉลยพร้อมๆกันค่ะ
The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australian share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart illustrates the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad in a period of a decade which reached its peak at 15 million people in 1995 and in the below graph indicates Australia’s share of marketing of Japanese tourists which peaked at seven million in 1993.
It can be seen from the bar chart that between 1985 and 1995, the amount of Japanese travelled to other countries grew rapidly in each year. There was five million tourist in the year of 1985 and the number tripled in a couple of years later (1987). However, in 1991 and 1992, the number was almost the same at about 12 million tourists. The highest number was accounted for 15 million people, which was three times higher than the number shown in 1985. The highest number of Japanese travelers who want to Australia for vacation purposes accounted for about 7 million people in 1993 and the lowest was bottomed out at about 5 million in the year of 1989.
From overall observation, over a period of the years from 1985 to 1995, the number on both charts substantially increased and there was a three-fold increase between 1985 and 1995 for Outside-Japan tourism of Japanese citizens. Similarly, Japanese that went to Australia for vacation considerably increased over the first four years with slight fall in 1989. However, continued to rise after that year.
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