กลับมาพบกับเฉลยงานเขียน IELTS ในหัวข้อ Reading comics only rotten the children’s mind that to provide any good education. How far do you agree or disagree with this กันนะคะ ใครที่ยังไม่มีโอกาสลองเขียนมาส่ง ลองกลับไปดูกันได้ที่
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Many people, particularly for children, are fond of comics and read them as a hobby because comic books, which narrate a story by author’s drawing, do not only ease to understand but also teaches them some knowledges and moralities information. In opposition, some argue that reading this kind of books leads kids to be rude and cruel. From my point of view, I, however, I believe that its benefits completely outweigh the drawbacks according to given these reasons below.
First and foremost, some kinds of cartoons educate readers in particular term aspects. For example, comics I like the best since and I have ever read is about veterinarian who can remedy any animals on matter how hard it is difficult the prognosis. At that time, I knew about how to look after my own pet and how to cure when deciseases reach them strike, which helped me a lot before it was dealth at the end of its to prolong lifespans. Consequently, it is clear that comics contain a huge pile of education can motivate and educate.
Moreover, although some people claim that some comics consist of wrongdoings in our society convincing youngsters to do it commit crimes, I, as one of comic readers, still insist on the opposition think otherwise. If we understand a the core or a background of the storyline, we will know that there must be some reasons to violate others, such as fighting for a justice in superhero comics or for protecting their important things from the threats and so on. Therefore, Tthose do not only grow teach youth’s reasonable minds, but also teach them ethics and be are an example to not doing like copy villains.
Last but not least, some characters in the comics may become adolescents’ inspiration. Generally, teenagers want to be like their heroes, for example, one, who loves to read superhero comics, may want to be a judge or a lawyer to eliminate crimes. Accordingly, kids should find their characteristics for what themy want to be in the future from comics which can reflect their personalities kind.
To sum up, reading comics provide not only educations to children, but also moralitiesy and inspirations. It is undoubt without doubt that reading them in appropriate ways will not rotten their mind and, in opposition, leads them to be proper adults. Consequently, why don’t we throw our prejudictione away and use them as another attractive method for academic purposes.
Estimate IELTS Band Score : 6.0
IELTS Examiner’s Comments :
Comments: The conclusion is excellent, but there are quite a few errors in the first half of the essay. The level of vocabulary is good at times but not consistent throughout. Your personal example helps to increase the score, and I hope you can cut down on errors for a higher grade. Keep trying
IELTS Institute Team