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Should parents be obliged to immunise their children against childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
Nowadays, immunization plays an important role in the medical prevention from some sicknesses. Whether or not every child must be vaccinated is often debated. Personally, I believe that parents ought to be forced to prevent their kids from diseases through immunization for two reasons.
Admittedly, some parents may think it is unnecessary vaccinating their kids as long as they monitor their children closely on their eating habits and exercising routines. Moreover, it would be a waste of time and money on the medical prevention.
However, I believe that immunizing children must be an obligation due to their lower performances of self-immunity. Therefore, these kids might get diseases easier and come up with more severe symptoms than adults whose immune systems are more effective fighting against pathogens. That is why receiving vaccines, serums, and toxoids is vital for all children at particular ages.
Another reason is that it could lead to the disease transmission if a child infected by transmitted germs go to school or other public places, the disease will possibly be widespread to larger communities via breathing or direct contact. Following this, more and more people would be sick and this might be more difficult to treat the ailment in case that the pathogens become resistant to antibiotics and other medicines. Also, the government or health-related organization would have to spend budgets on further medical researches and some preventative measures.
To sum up, in order to prevent these kids themselves from childhood illnesses in advance and the transmission of diseases, the immunization must be compulsory to all parents.