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Topic: In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Over the past years, many schools in some nations have faced a number of problems in poor behavior of students, especially children who have not been raised with a good nurture. This essay will present two causes and solutions including some examples from my perspective.
The first factor of either good or poor act of children is apparent from a nurture of parent and family such as kindness and virtue. Many parents teach their youngsters well and, as a result, they have a successful education and future career, but others who neglect their children, then they might be a trouble in school. If parents raise their young boys and girls with warmness, love and sufficiency, they will live and learn in schools with friends happily, and also they will not break laws. Moreover, families having many kids should balance time to each child and response theirs requirement equally; otherwise they might have a negative opinion such as envy. To solve this, those who have young juveniles should prepare right methods to teach them with appropriate punishment if they behave in wrong. For example, one of my uncles had a child who behaved a brawl with his friend. After teaching, his behavior changed in the positive way, and a result of study is excellent.
Furthermore, friends and school society are also influential to youngsters. Students who are in a group of coadjutant partners have a prosperous profile, and they are beloved from people, whereas some may join a delinquent group, then they will perform severe behavior. Additionally, those who cannot keep going in their school environment may isolate from society and have a problem on sociability. One of solutions is teachers’ management to organize and coach them with social activities such as working reports and playing sports as groups. For instance, as I studied in high school, my teachers formulated many educational patterns to learn as groups. The result was an effective class.
In conclusion, behavior of children can be taught and impacted by their guardians and school environment. In my opinion, the practical solutions of this issue are to encourage parents and teachers to collaborate and choose a right path to their youngsters.
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