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Topic : Nowadays, nurseries and kindergartens take care of children from an early age, so women can return to their work and children can get used to society early. Is this good thing ? What is your opinion ?
In the modern world, it is undeniable that parents are confronted with a financial crisis; therefore, working mothers should go back to work. As a result, those mothers let infant care centers or preschools to look after their children under the age of six. In my viewpoint, there are some downsides as follows.
To begin with, mothers who return to work after their baby is born risk causing serious damage to the child’s prospects in later life. Such children are more likely to do worse at school, become unemployed and suffer mental stress than youngsters whose mothers stay at home to bring them up. Owing to the fact that children are young and are not able to differentiate between right and wrong behavior; thus there is mother’s responsibility in bringing up the children and forming their characters as well as emotion, mental and intellectual development during their childhood.
Last but not least, the children are less likely to get the one-to-one care from childcare centers or kindergartens, this means those children may not get as much attention from care giver because a carer looks after up to three babies, this contributes children can not gain well development. In addition, the children may be more likely to catch illness such as colds and conjunctivitis easily; if infant care centers or preschools are not clean, it would affect with children’s health.
To conclude, all things taken into account, I am convinced that early childhood sees the greatest growth and development, this is a crucial part of children’s make up; consequently, children should be educated during their childhood and mothers play an important role in their children’s development.