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Topic: Now many people are forgetting their history and culture, so some people suggest that we should encourage people to wear their traditional clothing everyday. Do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons?
In modern society, lots of people neglect the history and culture of their country. Because of this some people advice we should incite individuals to dress their promote the wearing of traditional costumes everyday. In my perspective, dressing is original clothing everyday is not an appropriate thing idea.
It is true that some original clothes, such as in Thailand, is are not easy to wear. As as there is are too many accessories to finish complement the dressing in a and these are not practical to put on in a limited time in the morning. Moreover, the overload of accessories will be an annoyance to other people that have to help them to wear put on all those accessories because they can not were put on the cloths and accessories by themselfves. So Thus, this is a troublesome problem.
In addition, some original clothing is unsuitable for everyday life. As as many people use public transportation for work or study. Hence, it is probably an obstacle for everyday life. Take the Thai traditional uniform as an example, The skirt for women is long and narrow in a pencil-like form, so it is difficult to walk or run to a bus stop, underground station or others. And sometimes, dressing in such an unsuitable uniform to run may cause a serious accident in life such as a broken arm, broken leg and other broken head bones from easily tripping.
To summarize, the reasons why I am do not support to wear the traditional clothing every/day are because of an inconvenientce and inappropriate problems safety. In my point of view, it is there are many other ways to encourage citizens to recognize their history and culture. For instance, the government could make approaches a campaign to encourage everyone in the country to wear traditional costumes on nNation dDay.
Estimate IELTS Band Score: 6.0
IELTS Examiner Comments: Student, this was very good but try not to repeat too much vocabulary when you can. I like the real examples and ideas put forward but there is a little too much red ink. If you can fix your grammar a bit, your score would surely be higher.