กลับมาพบกับเฉลยงานเขียน IELTS ในส่วนที่ 2 สำหรับหัวข้อ languages die out กันนะคะ ใครที่ยังไม่มีโอกาสลองเขียนมาส่ง ลองกลับไปดูกันได้ที่
Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is undeniable that some languages
have completely disappear ed in the universe every?? year. People in the modern world have never heard about the existence of these suchlanguages before. This essay will discuss why the wip eing out of several languages ha ves brought tremendous benefits to individuals.
To begin with, there
will beare fewer languages for citizens to study, thus reducing financial burdens. It is true that parents nowadays spend a huge sum of money on their children’s education in the hope that they will be able to speak many languages. My relative s, for instance, was sent to a boarding school in the UK since he was young. at a young age. Despite the fact that he can speak English perfectly, his parents still want him to be able to speak additional languages to stand out amongst others. As a result, a lot of money was spent to pay for language s expense. learning.
Furthermore, by having fewer languages to worry about, it avoids confusion among people. We know exactly which language we are going to use when there are fewer choices from to choose. This example can be seen in the case when we have to conduct business
es with many people clients from different countries. If all of them use different languages as a means of communication, it would be impossible for both sides to understand each other. Therefore, fewer languages would make life much more easier and more time-saving than having to learn several languages.
In conclusion, having several languages only complicates our
life, lives especially in from financial aspects. Only languages which are used worldwide are only worth spending their one’s time on learning as it would let the allow communication to flow s.
(Estimate IELTS Band Score: 6.0)
IELTS Examiner Comments
You’re applied a good range of complex structure but there are errors with verbs (tenses). This detracts from the response greatly. Some of the vocabulary is also questionable. Try to really learn from errors which are edited. Good luck! Your score will be higher with a little more accuracy.
IELTS Institute Team