ช่วงนี้เข้าสู่เดือนกุมภาพันธ์แล้วนะคะ น้องๆหลายคนคงกำลังเข้าสู่ช่วงสอบที่แสนสำคัญ เนื่องจากมหาวิทยาลัยในระดับ Top Ten มักจะเริ่มมีที่จำกัด โดยเฉพาะอย่างยิ่งในสาขาที่คนนิยมมากๆ วันนี้พี่จึงเอาตัวอย่างหัวข้อที่น่าสนใจมาให้น้องๆฝึก writing ในส่วนของ Task II IELTS กันค่ะ
Some authors believe that urbanization is a ‘Modern Disease’. In no less than 250 words explain if you agree with this view and give your own opinion.
สำหรับตัวอย่าง Idea ในการตอบ writing ielts นี้มาจากน้องคนหนึ่งของสถาบันนะคะ ลองมาดูกันดีกว่าค่ะ
At present, it is undeniable that urbanization is spread to many societies in developing countries for making rural areas become civilized. Some people claim that urbanization has numerous advantages for people to live in modernized town. However, from my perspective, town that have been urbanized are suffered by various obstacles called ‘Modern Disease’.
First and foremost, urbanization causes environmental problems which are air pollution and water pollution. Pollution is regarded as a fundamental problem of developing countries as a whole. For example, if rural areas have to expand lands in order to build infrastructures such as office buildings, department stores, theatres, and resort hotels, it is inevitable to have many kinds of pollution caused by construction materials. Moreover, overpopulation is deemed as a major obstacle in urbanized towns. To illustrate this, Siam Paragon department store in Bangkok is a perfect example. In the weekend, a large number of people often go shopping and buying food. Because of this, goods in many shops are sold out. Having said that overpopulation makes people get frustrated, the government tries to find a way to reduce this stress by launching a campaign in order to persuade people to live in rural areas. In addition, urbanization contributes to have a crime in towns. Undoubtedly, pickpockets and robbers usually commit a crime in crowded places. For example, my friend went to Asiatique which is the famous landmark of tourists and Thais in Bangkok on Loy Kratong’s Day. I was told that her priceless Prada wallet had been stolen there the day before and she had been unable to catch the thief. She had felt like a fish out of the water because too many people had been bustling and noisy that she couldn’t even breathe. As a result, I realized that if my friend had lived in suburban areas, she would not have faced terrible situation about stealing.
With all things considered, many obstacles were happened because of urbanization. From where I stand, to prevent ‘Modern Disease’ not to happen in the future, the government have to plan practical strategies to prevent problems from urbanization in every areas for making people in societies live happily without fear and dissatisfaction.
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