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The given charts illustrate the proportion of males and females who further on their study in England in three periods of time by divided into two groups; Full-time education and Part-time education. It is readily apparent that the amount of students who attended Full-time course was much higher than that of Part-time program.
It can be seen from the chart that the largest figures of males who further Full-time education in the UK was pronounced in 1970/71, at 1,000 persons. The second highest amount was in 1990/91, with approximately 870 males, followed by 800 males in 1980/81. In marked contrast, the numbers of men who opt for Part-time education in Britain was about 10 times decreased from those who attained Full-time program in 1970/71. The figures grew steadily in the next two periods, however, they were still far less than those of in Full-time education.
In addition, the proportion of females who attained Full-time education rose gradually from about 700 in the years 1970/71 to about 1,100 in 1990/91. The figures of women in Full-time education was considerable less than males in the first two periods observed, however, the amount of females in this program was slightly more than males in the last year observed. Moreover, the numbers of women attained Part-time education was huge different than that of Full-time program. There were just under 200 female joined these program over the three periods observed.
From an overall observation, most male and female were preferred to further education in Full-Time program than Part-Time program.