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Many people believe that women make better parents than men, and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies, other claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view.
Families are claimed to be basic units of society as they are consisted of fathers and mother who play an important role in caring children. Some people agree that women have better ability to take care the youth while others argue that men can nuture the young one equal to women in every aspect. This essay will examine both sides of view including my own aspect of this issue.
To begin with, women tend to have more bonding with their kid they have developed maternal instinct sine they give a birth of their child. Especially, one who is breast feeding her baby, she creates mother-child bonding automatically. They generally have a feeling to protect the young one. Moreover, if the child is naughty or disobey , the mother is likely to regulate and act more softly. Another example is when the young one hurt himself accidentally, the mother tends to be more patient and treat their children more gently than the father.
On the other hand, men also have strong point to nurture their children. According to the fact that men can make a decision determinedly and have physical than women. Fathers tend to give more freedom to the youth and can influence their kids to be good leaders. Additionally, they can help their wife with jobs which need physical fitness; For example, they can lend a hand with earring luggages for children or even build a bed for their babies
From my opinion , this topic is not an either/or question. Both men and women have strengths and skills that are important for children’s upbringing. We need to ensure both parent play a suitable role in the family so as to give children a proper star in life.
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