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The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health. To what extent do you agree with these views?
At present, general society concern about nutrition and health in children is caused by the increasing number of overweight children especially in developed nations. According to public opinion, the expanding number of fast food outlets is the first issue and the alternative opinion is that parents do not pay enough attention to children’s health. This essay will examine both sides of these perspectives and my opinion is in favour of the former will be provided.
To begin with, fast food shops is located almost in every country and seems like to be expanding indefinitely. Moreover, fast foods are popular choices for children because it has good taste also the toys that are given away with foods are persuading children to buy the foods as well. On the other hand, fast foods are in high cholesterol, salt and fat, these causes lead to the serious health problems such as high blood pressure, high cholesterol level, obesity, diabetes and so on. As a result, obese children have poor health so they will not able to participate in activities.
On the contrary, others believe that parents are another reason that effect children’s health. Accordingly, parents may focus on work too much then they do not have enough time to supervise children. They don’t know how to cook and go to a fast food shop for their kids because fast food shops sell food for very low prices. Furthermore, they have an inadequate in nutritionally knowledge, which means non-plan of children foods.
From my perspective, I agree with both views that fast food outlets and parents are significant factors that influence to have children’s well-being but parents have more rival role than fast food shops because they can give an advice and teach them good eating habits.
In conclusion, fast food shop should have more responsibility to look after their foods for young people. However, parents should take an active role in their children’s lives even though there are los of fast food shops around the areas.
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