วันนี้พี่มีตัวอย่างของข้อสอบ Writing Task II ในวันที่เป็นการสอบแบบ General Training มาฝากกันนะคะ ซึ่งมีหลายจุดที่ IELTS Examiner ได้ให้ข้อมูลที่น่าสนใจเอาไว้ แล้วพี่จะนำมาเฉลยให้ในคราวหน้าค่ะ
Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
ลองมาดูที่เพื่อนได้เขียนไว้ แล้วเริ่มเขียนของเราเองขึ้นมาเลยนะคะ งานเขียนจะพัฒนาได้จุดเริ่มต้นอยู่ที่คำแรกที่เราตัดสินใจยกปากกาขึ้นเขียนค่ะ ขอให้น้องๆอดทนนะคะ แล้วความสำเร็จจะรอเราอยู่ไม่ไกลค่ะ
Being an excellent parent is not very easy. Therefore, there are many raising baby and child books available in the market. Even though these books can help a father or mother to take care of the baby, it is not enough to gain some skills which have to learn from practicing such as breast feeding, baby bath, assuming the baby’s requirement and so on. Thus, some people believe that it would be wonderful, if the schools can provide a course for teenagers to prepare themselves before having kids. I absolutely agree with this statement and I will also provide some necessary qualities for being a good parent in this essay.
Even though, we can raise our kids with the common sense, it does not mean they are treated in the appropriate way. Therefore, learning treating kids are very important. I have seen many young citizens who did not have knowledge about this and they had to cope with the complicated situation. Of course, dealing with uncertain circumstance was not effect only parents but also impact to their baby’s emotion. On the other hand, youths who was educated about taking care of baby would not be nervous about this responsibility and their kids were received the positive feeling. For example, my younger sister, who had trained to be a good parent for 1 year, can treat her baby very well.
According to my educational which is nursing science, I may suggest two skills for anybody who would like to be a terrific parent thus;
Firstly, emotional skill which is the most important because parents have to deal with many negative behaves from their babies. Therefore, they have to learn how to control their emotion for suitable feedback to their kids.
Secondly, physical skill which is as important as the first skill because parents will know what kind of nutrition will be beneficial for their children and also can encourage them to have satisfactory exercise for their anatomy.
In sum up, I strongly believe that it would be beneficial for young age to learn how to be a good father and mother from schools. Therefore, this discussion should be concerned in our social to make it happen in the reality.