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Topic: Now many people are forgetting their history and culture, so some people suggest that we should encourage people to wear their traditional clothing everyday. Do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons?
In modern society, lot of people neglect the history and culture of their country. Because of this some people advice we should incite individuals to dress their traditional costumes everyday. In my perspective, dressing original clothing everyday is not appropriate thing.
It is true that some original clothes, such as Thai, is not easy to wear . As there is too many accessories to finish dressing in a limited time in the morning. Moreover, the overload of accessories will be an annoyance to other people that have to help them to wear all accessories because they can not were the cloths and accessories by themselves. So, this is a trouble some problem.
In addition, some original clothing is unsuitable for everyday life. As many people use public transportation for work or study. Hence, it is probably an obstacle for everyday life. Take Thai traditional uniform as an example, The skirt for women is long and narrow pencil-like form, so it is difficult to walk or run to bus stop, underground station or others. And sometimes dressing unsuitable uniform to run may cause a serious accident in life such as broken arm, broken leg and broken head.
To summarize, the reason why I am not support to wear the traditional clothing everyday because of an inconvenient and inappropriate problems. In my point of view, it is many other ways to encourage citizens to recognize their history and culture. For instance, goverment make approaches to everyone in the country to wear traditional costumes on nation day.
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