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Task 2– “It is widely believed that children of different levels of intelligence should be taught together, while others think that more intelligent children should be taught separately. Discuss and your own opinion”
In today’s world, the topic choice about whether children of different levels of intelligence should be taught together or not is very controversial. Some people believe that intelligent children should be taught separately. However, other people are of the opinion that teachers should teach all children together in the same class not segregate those based on knowledge. This essay will examine both views and I will give my own opinion my opinion will be given.
To begin with, more and more peopleàreally true? are of the opinion that intelligent children should be separated from other children so that teachers might teach them faster and easier. By doing this, separated intelligent children could learn more knowledge and complete a course very fast. àhow? Therefore, they could grow up to become an intelligent people and might create some innovative things tools for the world.(explain this further here.)
On the other hand, some people believe that teaching all children of various levels of intellect together has many more advantages. First of all, intelligent children could help their peers in a class in case some children don’t understand what a teacher teaches them. This means that all children classmates might learn and understand all lessons together. Moreover, intelligent children in class rooms encourage and inspire other children to make put in more effort in the class where they study together. This would lead to improving normal common children to be become intelligent persons in the future.(how does this benefit the intelligent children?)
I personally agree that all children should be taught together because they might learn to help each other in order to success their studies together. This would teach them how to live in the real society. Helping each other in class rooms would also make them to be good adults in the society.
All in all, although separating the children who are more intelligent than the others for schooling has some benefits, teaching all of them together has many more advantages. I firmly believe that it would be better if all children stayed and learned together, they mightunderstand how to live with other people and would (19 modal verbs!) be a good guy productive citizens in the future.
(Estimate IELTS Band Score: 5.5)
IELTS Examiner Comments:
You clearly have proven that you know modal verb + V1 structures as you have 19 examples of it. That is way too many times. Although your level of accuracy is very high and there are some good complex structures, the value of the language is not that high. Where are the perfect tenses, continuous tenses, passive voices?
IELTS Institute Team