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Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.
In this day and age, a large problem for most major cities is the traffic jams. It is undeniable that soaring of urban populations by leaps and bound in big cities are growing excessively leading to traffic congestion which has become a global costly issue that needs to instantly resolve be addressed and resolved. This essay will provide the some feasible approaches to mitigate this huge predicament development.
First of all, public transportation is the good best alternative way for commuters to get around instead of using their own car; thus, governments should re-evaluate and re-allocate the budget so as to deliberately improve public transportation services for the sake of declining traffic congestion saving money in the long term. It can be obviously seen that some kind of public vehicles are not clean and comfortable enough to motivate individuals to use them and some of them have high fares, for instance sky – trains and the underground. If they lessened lower ticket prices of those by providing subsidies for transport service companies, many commuters would increasingly use them for travelling and refrain from using their cars.
Secondly, the number of cars has surged rapidly,; as a consequence, legislators should enact a bill to tackle this situation. For example,they should increase tariffs for important individual cars. Using this measure will discourage others to buy new cars and still use buses, speed boats ferries, sky – trains and subways as a means of transport. In addition, charging the drivers who will go into city center is one of the solutions to cope with this issue. For instance, London has enforced this regulation to all drivers who drive into downtown. They have to pay approximately 8 pound per day. This would enable to mitigate traffic jams in major cities and provide revenue to be spent on upgrading public transport.
All in all, even though it is very hard to deal with this huge problem, I firmly believe that traffic congestion can definitely be lowered by the courses of actions as above mentioned my ideas.
ประเมิน IELTS Band Score: 6.0
IELTS Examiner’s Comments : Student, you have tried to vary your language, which is good, but some word choices are wrong. On the while, your essay is quite good and I would try to link a few more ideas together, especially when it come to the financial side of your argument. Your conclusion needs a final though because we expect more substance in the conclusion.
IELTS Institute Team