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The human race is facing problems which are getting more acute as time gone on. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
At present, it is generally believe that we are confronting various of problems which are seem to be severe more and more. People around the world are killed by natural disasters which frequently emerge in many countries. In addition, unknown diseases occurred in some parts of the world. People, therefore, die without remedies. This essay will discuss these miserable problems.
First, natural disasters normally occur for decade such as earthquakes and tidal waves. If these calamities happen, thousands of humans will die: not only do people lose their families, but governments also spend many billion on economic reconstructions. Take Japan as an example, there was a powerfully nine magnitude earthquake which caused loss of life, severe economic problems, and massive movements of citizens in Japan. After first tremor, there was an aftershock with a magnitude of 6.5 struck surrounding areas of epicenter. Then, a ten-metre tsunami, tidal waves, hit the south of Thailand resulting in my cousins who traveled to Phuket, southern area, at that time died from these natural disasters.
Furthermore, fatal diseases are rising rapidly despite medical advances, particularly strange diseases which is incurable. Some people contract dreadful diseases such as AIDS and cancer which is difficult to cure and cause death. Apart from that, several unknown diseases happen in some countries such as SARS; it initially occurred in China bringing doctors and scientists to astonishingly doubt about causes and treatments of this diseases. Many people who infect with SARS will certainly die instantly because it is incurable. Moreover, I heard from the news that rate of people dying from fatal diseases is increasing dramatically around the world.
In conclusion, many calamities caused by natures and diseases are more extremely severe leading to individuals directly face distressed incidents.
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