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Some people think the child should be brought up in the village because of good environment. Meanwhile, some people think the young child should be brought up in cities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In modern society, most parents are concern about finding on ideal place to raise up their child. Some individuals clam that child should grow up in suburb. Other, however, believe that their child should be raised in urban areas. This essay will examine both side of this argument.
First and foremost, a child growing up in countryside is healthier than in town. This is because living in the village provides a child with healthy living environment. In term of physical health, according to many works of research, they show that urbanites have more fragile health than suburbans due to contaminated food, water and air, which are cause by huge polluted emission from dense industry and household. In other words, country children can breath freash air and eat fresh food. Moreover, a good mental is also the benefit of growing up from rural areas. Children have vast green areas of fields as well as play groups allowing them to play with their friend. Therefore, they can lean to give and share, which help them to adapt themselves to other. Importantly, suburbanites are very hospitable, and haven’t stressful life.
However, a child should be brought up in town for several aspects. First, the education in the city is apparently better than the village because there is a high competion among several education institutions. If some of them don’t improve their quality and hire excellent professional teachers, children will more to study at other institution that have a higher standard. Moreover, because of many high quality school, unlike rural areas, children in the city don’t have to waste their time for traveling to school. Second urban children have a colorful spare time. There are many entertainment facilities such as museum, park, zoo, concert hall. They can get great satisfaction from these things.
From where I stand, bring up the child in the village win my vote since it enable the child to become a healthy a healthy person, in both physical and mental health. I suggest that parents should consider their children’ health condition to be a first priority.