Reference: IELTS ESSAY TOPIC : Traffic congestion
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In today’s world, the major cities are attractive areas places to live that persuade people to live in more than previous times. Therefore, the massive issue in the thousands of major cities worldwide is overcrowded traffic and this problem seems to be increasing every day. This essay will illustrate advice in the reduction of transportation in big cities.
First of all, people are coming to stay more and more in major cities because there are lots of attractions, for instance, opportunity for jobs, many facilities, transportation centres, commercial centres and so on. Moreover, many people live in a limited space area so this it causes of many kinds of problems such as road congestion. Furthermore Besides, this issue will keep is still kept going on and on every day if we do not have some precise solutions.
Turning to the solutions, firstly, society should impel people to use more public transports such as buses, taxis, the underground, skytrain, railway and many others etc. Also, citizens should be encouraged them to walk and cycle. Therefore, the fares for of buses and trains should be cheap in order to encourage passengers to take public transportation. Secondly, the government should introduce higher taxes for vehicles, which that can reduce the number of private cars and decrease the number of people who are deciding to purchase a car.
Thirdly, the roads need to be expanded more and express ways should be constructed, which can mitigate the traffic congestion as well. Finally, all of those solutions must have participation from the government and citizens and do are not abandoned halfway. the traffic jams problems until unresolved.
To conclude, it is obviously that the road congestion is becoming a serious problem. However Thus, the appropriate measures must be taken to prevent this problem of traffic congestion.
Estimate IELTS Band Score: 6.0
IELTS Examiner’s Comment:
This was a good task two response. Watch for your use of plural nouns. You made a few mistakes by not adding an “s” to the noun. Also, look at prepositions and articles in your paper. Few sentences need rephrasing and I have done that for you (ie. the last sentence of the third body paragraph). Although the argument was written quite well, the ideas should have been developed more sufficiently.