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The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in the most of the world’s cities can be attributed directly to the rapid increasing number of private cars in use, discuss possible way to encourage the use of public transport.
In present day, many countries are seriously concerning about congestion and pollution problems and the mainly factor is the considerable increasing in use of private cars. This essay will examine some feasible methods to persuade people to use public transport instead.
To solve these problems, encouraging people to change their daily travelling habit to use public transport is the most effective way. There are some persuasive measures that can convince individual to use less personal cars. Firstly, the government should provide enough and comfortable public transport such as sky train and buses. For example, locals station and time table should be expanded wide and increasing frequent trips are very important to avoid the over loading of people in each trip and ensure those commuters can get to a destination as much convenient as possible. Furthermore, funds should be allocation in order to make these service cheaper and more reliable. People, consequently ten to use more public service rather than drive.
Additionally, drivers should be required to pay congestion fee for every car going into the city centre it would force implicitly people to use public transport more often than individuals’ car in order to sore their expense. For instance, in the city of London drivers have to pay 8 pounds if they entry the centre of the city. Therefore, if people feel that this fee is a dispensable expense, they will avoid to spend this by not driving into the city.
To sum up, if government provide an appropriate public transport as well as congestion fee is required, these would encourage people to commute by public transport rather than their own cars. By introduction such measure and result, it would be decrease level of traffic jam and bad pollution.
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